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Romantic flow

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What's wrong with the world, mama
People livin' like they ain't got no mamas
I think the whole world addicted to the drama
Only attracted to things that'll bring you trauma
Overseas, yeah, we try to stop terrorism
But we still got terrorists here livin'
In the USA, the big CIA
The Bloods and The Crips and the KKK
But if you only have love for your own race
Then you only leave space to discriminate
And to discriminate only generates hate
And when you hate then you're bound to get irate, yeah
Madness is what you demonstrate
And that's exactly how anger works and operates
Man, you gotta have love just to set it straight
Take control of your mind and meditate
Image size
800x533px 128 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 500D
Shutter Speed
1/395 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 4, 2009, 5:58:11 PM
Sensor Size
3mm
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angel-of-time's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I am not really a photographer, nor am I very good at judging them due to my lack of understanding.
Though I will try to bring forward the view I see as a person, an admirer of such Art Forms.
I hope to be fair and polite <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Vision:
This criteria really depends on the person. For me the visual impact of this piece is decent. The aim to capture the beauty of the blooming flowers was right on target. Though, it is a shame you can only see a few of them clearly. Most of the pinkish flowers are blurry and seem distant.
The Photo itself has a more dreamy effect due to being unfocused and that is exactly the reason as to why it captures my attention.
Focus is not all, but a bit more of it would compliment this piece <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Originality:
There isn't a lot of Originality in this piece.
But there would be if you would write something about this photo in your own little Artist Comment. A proper explanation helps heaps!
It would give the viewer a better idea of what to see, what to think and what to feel. Your on-look alone could help the piece stand out a lot more, giving the impression you really gave some thought towards it.

Technique:
It is difficult to get a perfect shot at living or moving things, no matter if they are plants or animals.
Also the sunlight plays an important role.
You managed to make the photo seem clean, neat and tidy. The flowers are in a good position and you are able to see passed them.
I am not sure what lies in the distance, but it almost looks like a tiny church in the middle of a forest full of pink. A little more focus might have added to the scenario.
But that is just me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>

Very romantic, plus a small heap of mystery mixed into the atmosphere.
Basically very enchanting~

Impact:
Combining all the criteria I see a very simple, yet lovely Art Piece. The flowers are fragile and pure, making it seem like an enchanting home for fairies.
And even though the seemingly cold atmosphere reminds me of a late autumn day it is still very dreamy, romantic and loving.
A very balanced piece.

Great work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt=":rose:" title="Rose"/>